Additional zaps with constructive comments, sharing here for everyone's benefit if you are considering composing future MR:
"You should be clear about Xiao Han’s offerings." -> i thought i was, i will re-assess my writing style
"Problem with your MR is you seem to hide XH is not worth the visit" -> she IS worth the visit to ME, i thought that was clear. the intention was to share my thoughts/impressions/experience and it's not meant to be a recommendation for you to visit because everyone has different needs
My last post on this, thanks for the encouragement guys!
