The story of Tan Ah Beng... - Page 11

Cao_pi · #**151** 11-04-2006, 07:47 AM

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Bro,

Honestly speaking, your story is captivating me at this moment. Any thoughts of publication? With stronger plots and better editor, your story will be a hit among man . Looking forward to more stories... All the best!

Its starting to match up to OES standard

KNS!

So long then post, I was waiting to see whether your story is worth publication, now my doubts is cleared. Your method of writing carries the exact element a good writer should have, the excitement you create through the lustful Carol. The Hook you use on us brothers through slow and steady torture. If you are really interested to get it publish, do drop me a PM

3 thumbs up!

prince_81 · #**152** 12-04-2006, 01:11 AM

more more more
i have been waiting for the story
hehe

scorkeong · #**153** 12-04-2006, 02:06 AM

it is good to see you again , but the story is too short lol cannot get enough keep it up

cheers every brother

raider123 · #**154** 13-04-2006, 02:20 AM

"Ho Liao Tin Toy" (Good stuff is kept to the last-in Teochew)

Hahaha...so many bros here want to help me to publish this story...It's ok. As long as the bros here enjoy it, that is my greatest satisfaction as a writer....

Watch out for the next episode...Does Ah beng really wants to take revenge or he decides to cool down again due to his good nature??? What will he do to???

ok69 · #**155** 13-04-2006, 03:05 AM

camping here

good plot ..

SexFreak · #**156** 13-04-2006, 02:41 PM

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Originally Posted by raider123

Watch out for the next episode...

Bro, we have been watching and waiting since day 1

Hope won't take long for the next exciting episode

Cheers !!!

oakleyeug · #**157** 13-04-2006, 03:18 PM

Sir wah ur story is like once in a blue moon or r u having writers block? Pls don torture us write more or think more and may your writers block go away fast.