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Nice story.
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Interesting lay out for the story bro, a slow and nice build up, so don't worry, carry onz with ur style of writing la, enjoying it!! Cherrs bro, .................
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cannot lah bro. U sniper nor recki one issit? I dunno who else up there at that time leh
thanks thanks. I tot I was too long winded & most bros expecting some actions the 1st page.
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Setting up smoke camp
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I'm on overseas assignment. Just came back to hotel half drunk. Just a short installment. No cliffhanger, sorry bros.
Cont... Argh...what the hell! Dun think dun think. It's not possible... Back in office, I sms her "everything ok?" Jer: "not ok also must live on. At least for my daughter." Me: "small issue lah. At least he's not seeing other woman." Jer: "unless some other woman got so much money to dump on him." Me: "hahah. On a bright side, at least he didn't hit u." Half hour later.... Me: "or did he?" Another half hour later. Jer: "pls keep my personal life a secret." What bothered me then is the fact that my million dollar question still unanswered. Somehow, I already know the answer.... I tried to divert the topic with a bit of humour: "what? Did you say anything to me?" Jer: "haha. I'm glad I know u. Take care see u tomorrow" Me: "me too. Take care & have a nice rest. Dun stay out too late. be a good girl and drinks on me next time." From then on, jermaine is more opened to me bout her personal life. Time & again she'd remind me to keep her problem a secret. She spoken to no one as she confessed she wanna keep a happy family image to her team colleagues and even her boss. I couldn't remember how long she said she's been married, but it was 10years ago when she meet her husband. She describe him as very 'kuw lan' & 'te ki'. Thought he would changed after becoming a dad but still the same. Sometimes she would show me her sms quarrel with her husband. When we can afford longer lunchtime, we went from fine diners to kopi tiam for beer or wine. Thru all her bitching, I sincerely felt for her. There wasn't any real solution. She wasn't really looking for one from me. I just offered her my ears...
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TS ....
A nice writing style ... U got yourself another camper ... hope you have enough tents and beers .. |
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Hmm a shoulder to cry on
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You have good writing style man! you can really go scriptwriting ^^
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Thank you for the compliments
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Will continue when I settle back in sg, cheers & thanks esp those who up my rep.
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Cant wait for the next posting... keep it coming.
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mr verytired,
pls continue writing.... i like yr story.... i purposely went to suntec city today lunch time to see can spot both of u anot, hahah.... |
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sio hoon kee buddy falling in!!
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sio hoon kee buddy falling in !!!
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Bro verytired ur story not long winded lah got structure mah like ur heading smoke buddy>beer buddy > fb so now waiting anxiously for the fb part haha...just joking lah pls do continues ur style of writing.
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And thanks to all who up my rep, anonymous or otherwise. Btw, confession...I see 4 stars at my thread, wondering what that is, I clicked with this silly phone and suddenly became 5 stars. Bo pan kay hor. Sorry sorry.
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